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Her eyes darkened as the boy bit his pearly white chiclet teeth into her pale, skinny neck. Blood streamed down her chest as it hit the ground, tears blurred up in her eyes. All her life she had wanted this, but never had she imagined it hurting so much. The boy removed his teeth, gently stroking the place he had just infected.
"Don't worry," he cooed. "It will heal soon, as will your humanity, except you'll be a bloodsucker." The word rolled off his tounge. He looked like he hated saying this word, which he did.
The girl cried and gently kissed him on the lips. "Thank you," she responded. "Thank you, thank you." The boy smiled at his lover, the one who had wanted to become one of him for so long. They had been together for about three years, and one of the first things he told her was that he was, in fact, a vampire. The thought terrified her, but she was infatuated with him. He hated that she had to live her life in such a way that if they were to stay together forever, she'd have to become a vampire.
"I love you." He said, and with one last breath he regretted everything he had done.
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Author's Comments


THIS. IS. SHORT.
SO SHUT UP.
yeah, there will be more chapters. notice the 1?
this is just a short story i'm workin' on. [:

it has a twilight twist to it, doesn't it?
ugh, i tried to make it really un-twilight. ):

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:iconchakatehmoogle:
oooh, great start! :] I liked it.

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"People love a happy ending, so every episode I will explain once again that I do not like people. Then Mal will shoot someone. Someone we like. And their puppy." - Joss Whedon
:iconsesshou-maru:

thanks!
i thought it was a bit small. :/


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i'll be just fine pretending i'm not.
:iconchakatehmoogle:
Short but sweet? :P

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"People love a happy ending, so every episode I will explain once again that I do not like people. Then Mal will shoot someone. Someone we like. And their puppy." - Joss Whedon
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Thats really good.
Seriously.
More plz?


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Moved: *FrankMe-x
:iconjuststrange:
Thats really good!
I like the idea of their love only workign if she becomes a vampire too!

:) And youre way too good at describing things! x

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This is the most adorable face you will ever see in your life... Remember it well, because HE'S MINE! [link]
:iconsesshou-maru:

sure. [:


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i'll be just fine pretending i'm not.
:iconsmiling-vixen:
Wow, I like it.

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No Sir! I didn't see you playing with your dolls again!!
Tapanga?!
I'm watching you!!
92% of teens would be dead if Abercrombie and Hollister said it wasn't cool to breathe. Put this in your signature if you are part of the 8% that would be laughing.
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thank you. :D


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i'll be just fine pretending i'm not.

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